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Windowshopping Date

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*slides 20$ to Horikoshi* Make Tsuchako canon.

While I was on vacation I colored a sketch I did a while ago, because I really liked it; also I used it to experiment a bit with lights and shadows... and added a simple background, because I need to get used drawing them as often as possible.

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very interesting, interesting position, idea, the way the redhead (or brunette?) girl kisses the greenette's cheek, the elaborated position and the content smile on the other's face is cute and heartwarming, though, some stuff can be improved, for exemple the hand on the cheek, it looks a little bit flat around her thumb and too round on the bottom, hands are not my strongest subject, sometimes it can be quiet a challenge to draw realistic and beautiful hands, but of course it's not too dramatic or anything, only 2 details, as for the girl's faces, the redhead/brunette's nose is quiet high, it makes her cheeks looks higher and not too natural, it's only a matter of shading, and of course you can put it a little bit down, as for the other girl's face, I think her lips are a little bit too pale, that gives her a kind of 'sick' feeling, it looks a little bit too oversized as well (maybe it's your own style?so I'll not talk too much about that) but I honestly don't think it suits her beautiful features, I think a normal size would suit her better, as for the background, it's nice and cool, I like the clothing store and the rosy outfit in the background, it's nice and girly, something you can truly associate with this image really, and I like the background's shading as well, keep up the good work, and you can count on me to visit your gallery if you redo this drawing, it's very nice idea actually :)