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I'm a stray dog sick
Please let me in (please let me in)
The mad key's tripping
Singing vows before we exchange smoke rings
Fall Out Boy - 20 Dollar Nose Bleed
Finally the KuroKen pic I promised you in that poll! (Even thought it isn't much shippy, I really can't picture Kenma doing 'romantic' things
)
I would have finished it a while ago... but my tablet died when I was almost done >_> Luckily now it seems like it works again, but I don't know how long it is going to last... let's hope the new one arrives soon!
In the meanwhile I hope to be able to do some works for the Oiyama week <3
There isn't much of a context... I just got inspired by the song.
They probably got in a fight and... yep, this pic is implying Kenma punched someone.
Any kind of costructive criticism is warmly welcome!
More art from me:
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Please let me in (please let me in)
The mad key's tripping
Singing vows before we exchange smoke rings
Fall Out Boy - 20 Dollar Nose Bleed
Finally the KuroKen pic I promised you in that poll! (Even thought it isn't much shippy, I really can't picture Kenma doing 'romantic' things
)I would have finished it a while ago... but my tablet died when I was almost done >_> Luckily now it seems like it works again, but I don't know how long it is going to last... let's hope the new one arrives soon!
In the meanwhile I hope to be able to do some works for the Oiyama week <3
There isn't much of a context... I just got inspired by the song.
They probably got in a fight and... yep, this pic is implying Kenma punched someone.
Any kind of costructive criticism is warmly welcome!
More art from me:
****Original Tumblr post
You're not allowed to redistribuite, edit or use in any way this work without my permission.
COMMISSIONS AND POINT COMMISSIONS ARE OPEN
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While I like the colours and the textures that I can see on the characters here, there are a few anatomical problems that pop out.
Addressing the first character, try lifting your arm into the same position that character is sporting--arm tucked close to side, elbow jutting forward, but the hand turned and directed straight away from the face. Can't do it, right? The elbow should be further out to the character's side for the hand to be able to come up and be placed in front of their face like that. Additionally, is that purple-lidded eye meant to be a black eye? If so, you might want to make the area around the eye puffy and swollen. Black eyes tend to swell before the bruising appears and takes a while to go away, and based on the fact that the character is still bleeding I'm assuming the fight in which they got the black eye was recent, so the skin around that eye should be a little more swollen, possibly swelling over the eye and making the eye more difficult to open fully.
With regards to the other character, the perspective and body proportions are, sadly, way off. It's a good try but there's a problem with how everything is placed. Based on the position you've displayed here the character looks as though their legs are tucked up very close to their body, but if that were the case their knees should actually be much higher (they tend to be at about the arm pit in that position). For the knees to be in the position they are currently shown to be in (just below or reaching the center of the breasts), the legs and feet would have to extend out further, giving the knees some slack. As a result, the arms resting on the knees have awkward proportions and look far too small for the character.
I don't know what your initial intent was with the piece (whether it was to convey a scene or to display characters or what) so I won't make note of the lack of background.
Ultimately, I like the colours, but you might want to practice getting a more definitive grasp on anatomy and lights/shadows since I cant readily see any apparent light source (the shadows on the left character's hand and wrist led me to believe that the light source was coming from slightly over their shoulder, but the shadows on their back and the highlights on the eyes and lips of the other character clearly noted that this could not be the case).
Addressing the first character, try lifting your arm into the same position that character is sporting--arm tucked close to side, elbow jutting forward, but the hand turned and directed straight away from the face. Can't do it, right? The elbow should be further out to the character's side for the hand to be able to come up and be placed in front of their face like that. Additionally, is that purple-lidded eye meant to be a black eye? If so, you might want to make the area around the eye puffy and swollen. Black eyes tend to swell before the bruising appears and takes a while to go away, and based on the fact that the character is still bleeding I'm assuming the fight in which they got the black eye was recent, so the skin around that eye should be a little more swollen, possibly swelling over the eye and making the eye more difficult to open fully.
With regards to the other character, the perspective and body proportions are, sadly, way off. It's a good try but there's a problem with how everything is placed. Based on the position you've displayed here the character looks as though their legs are tucked up very close to their body, but if that were the case their knees should actually be much higher (they tend to be at about the arm pit in that position). For the knees to be in the position they are currently shown to be in (just below or reaching the center of the breasts), the legs and feet would have to extend out further, giving the knees some slack. As a result, the arms resting on the knees have awkward proportions and look far too small for the character.
I don't know what your initial intent was with the piece (whether it was to convey a scene or to display characters or what) so I won't make note of the lack of background.
Ultimately, I like the colours, but you might want to practice getting a more definitive grasp on anatomy and lights/shadows since I cant readily see any apparent light source (the shadows on the left character's hand and wrist led me to believe that the light source was coming from slightly over their shoulder, but the shadows on their back and the highlights on the eyes and lips of the other character clearly noted that this could not be the case).